Question

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英検英作文です。
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TOPIC
1 Do you think that online courses are as effective as traditional
classes?
POINTS>
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• Costs
Flexibility
●
Interactive learning
• Motivation

I do not think online courses are
as effective
as traditional
classes. If Students take traditional courses, they can improve
their achivement at school and the ability to adjust to the
society.
studying
on
First, most of students cannot concentrate on
online courses. If they take online lessons, they will do diffent
things such as playing games, and so on because they are
not monitored by their teacher. Therefore if they take traditional
ones, they can focus on
listening to the instructor and make
their mind good.
Moreover, students taking online classes will not be able to apply
theirselves for the society. Compared with the students, students.
to school fare much better at chatting with others. So
they will more often be promoted.
who
go
For these reasons, traditional classes are more effective than
traditional classes.