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Topic: it is sometimes said that all people should be able to enter museums for free. Do you agree with this opinion?

Answer

I agree that all people should be able to enter museums for free.I have two reasons.
First, a lot of people can have more interest in Art and history. If It costs money, people worry about paying or not. But it's free, people don't have any risks.
Second, you can make the best learning environment. Especially, children don't have enough money. So it is better than to cost.
For these reasons, I think all people should be able to enter museums for free.

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