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I think students spend too much time doing club activities at school.
I have two reasons why I think so.
The first reason is that we don’t have any free time.
Students should spend studying a lot of time.
The second reason is that the time of go home is very late.
We should go home early time and night is very dangerous.
They are the reasons why, I think students spend too much time doing club activities at school.

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POINTS
● Time ●Study
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YES (Pros)
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自由時間がない
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TOPIC
Some people say that students spend too much time doing club
activities at school. Do you agree with this opinion?
A
●Competition
さい。
NO (Cons)
時間が長くても楽しい

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✅ I think students spend too much time doing club activities at school.

✅ I have two reasons why I think so.

✅🟠 The first reason is that we don’t have any free time.
✅ The first reason is that we have less time to study.

❌ Students should spend studying a lot of time.
✅ Students should spend a lot of time studying.

❌ The second reason is that the time of go home is very late.
✅ The second reason is that the time to go home is very late.
✅✅ The second reason is that the time to go home becomes very late.
✅✅✅ The second reason is that the time to go home becomes late when we do club activities.

❌ We should go home early time and night is very dangerous.
✅ We should go home early because the night is very dangerous.
✅✅ We should go home early because the night can be dangerous.

❌ They are the reasons why, I think students spend too much time doing club activities at school.
✅ These are the reasons why I think students spend too much time doing club activities at school.

early time:
✅ We should go home early.
✅ We should go home at an early time.
❌ We should go home early time.
✅ In the early times, houses were made of wood.

参考になれば嬉しいです
✅ I hope this is helpful!