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こんにちは、英検2級~準一級レベルの英作文を書きたいです。
この文法おかしい、この表現の方がかっこいいなどの添削お願いします！！
「将来、より多くの人が田舎に住むことを選ぶ」というテーマに対し、賛成（Agree）の立場で約130語の英作文をかけ。

I agree with the idea that more people will choose to live in the countryside in the future. I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First, the cost of living is much lower in the countryside than in big cities. For example, people can rent large houses at affordable prices. This allows them to save money and enjoy a more comfortable life.
Second, the development of technology has changed people’s lifestyles. Since many people can now work from home using the internet, they do not need to live near their offices in crowded cities. They can live in a quiet environment surrounded by nature while continuing their jobs.
For these reasons, I believe that more people will move to the countryside to seek a better quality of life.

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