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22年度第1回筆訂 4 Write an ssay given TOPIC. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. .Suggested length: 120-150 words answer sheet. Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your Any writing outside the space will not be graded. TOPIC Should people's salaries be based on their job performance? POINTS ⚫Age Spend 2 Go fishin Company profits Motivation C . Skills 3 K 生産性が上がる→会社の利益につながる 多くのお金を得る。 barinqon gni 社員とする→お金をもらうため。 1 Her 2 Her 3. She borilep Show and worker IS E スキルをもつため。 TI by 1990sm or so of togiot H S No. 11 1 Shanti soli jon bib ogni giring. E.M

Do you think traveling by train is better than traveling by car? という問いに対しての返答としてこの文章は適切でしょうか。 英文学作るのがとても苦手なので単語の使い方などの文法重視でお願いします🙇 字が丁寧... Read More

traveling by train is better I think that than traveling by cat, I have two reasons. First, it makes travel easier and more confortable.) (31) For example, they need not drive car. Second, it really improves the quality of travel in many ways.(+2) That is because train is farster than car. (50)

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When students go to university, they usually go to the campus and take classes in classrooms with other students. However, there are other types of classes for students to take. Some of them take online classes from home without going to the campus. What are some benefits of this? Online classes are helpful for students living far away from the campus because they do not need to travel for long periods of time. Moreover, in the case of recorded online classes, students can watch recorded classes over and over again so that they can understand the classes better. However, some students may have problems with their computers or their Internet connection during online classes. This can make it difficult to take the classes smoothly. Also, if students do not go to the campus, they will have fewer chances to see each other face-to-face and talk to other students. Because of this, some students may feel lonely.

論表の分詞についてです！ 解いてみたのですが、間違っていたら教えて欲しいです🙇🏻‍♀️よろしくお願いします、！

を選び、形を変えて対話文を完成させなさい。 (2点×5=10点)女性 (1) A: Did you change your hair style, Yoko? 名) B: Yes, I had ) my hair cut a week ago. (はい、一週間前に髪を切ってもらいました。) (2) A: You shouldn't look at your phone ( eating ) dinner, Paul, (夕食を食べながら、スマホ B: I know, Mom. But it's the Wimbledon men's final! (3) A: What did you hear last night? サムバディ スクリーンドウ ストリート を見てはいけません。) B: I heard somebody (Screamed) on the street. (私は誰かが通りで叫ぶのを聞きました。 コリドー (4) A: Don't walk (Jexting ) messages in the corridor, Tom. (廊下でメッセージを送らないで ください。) B: All right, Mr. Young. I won't do it again. (5) A: Have you got your phone (repaired), Mamiko?(スマホは修理してもらいましたか? B: Not yet. I'm going to take it to the shop yet tonight. [ repair / scream / have / eat/text] 今夜

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Unfortunately, many of the soldiers' letters were never delivered to the mainland. On February 19, the US Forces started to invade the island. After fighting from underground shelters for a month, almost all of Kuribayashi's soldiers were killed. About five months later, World War II ended. After the war, some letters were returned to Japan from the US. They had been taken from Iwoto by the American soldiers. The following is one such letter. Sadly, the family members of the writer have not been found yet. Father, Mother, Torao, Kei, Eizo, Tadashi, Otaka, Sueharu, Tatsumi, Fumiko, and Tatsuko. I would like to wish you all good health and a long life. Father and Mother, please take good care of yourselves as you are getting older.

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I really feel sorry for you, hearing how your hands get cold and cracked because of the cold weather and water in winter. Whenever you use water, make sure you dry your hands and then rub them until they get warm. (December 11, 1944) This letter was written by Kuribayashi Tadamichi to his wife. He was a commander on Iwoto, a battlefield during World War II. He wrote many letters to her from there. Iwoto is a small flat island that lies 1,250 km south of Tokyo. One of the hardest battles between Japan and the US was fought there. The island was a very important place for both the US and Japan. For Japan, it was the last base to protect the mainland.

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11 次の各文の( )に入れるのに最も適切なものを,1,2,3, ↓ チェック欄 □ (1) ( 1 If 2 As can't→現在 could not →過去 ・することができなかった合格 3 Because 過去を否定 4の中から一つずつ選びなさい。 he studied hard, Bob 「could not pass the examination.」動+目的語 解答 (1) 4 (何を) 試検 4 Though □ (2) Truly he came here, () he didn't talk about it. (2) 1 実 but 2 since 3 for SEA スキルを持っている Cknow 新しいスキルを得る □ (3) I've learned() Americans open gifts as soon as they receive 4 and get 手に入れる (3) 4 しった。 うけとる したらすぐに them. それらを 1 if 2 and 3 when 4 that だということ 過去分詞 □ (4) I've known Ray ( ) I was a child. (4)3 1 from 私が子供だった時点 2 when 3 since 4 as ~からずっと giveup □(5)( )you begin, you must not give it up easily. 始める してはいけない あきらめる 1 Once 2 For 3 Never ~するとすぐに 初 ~したら are 4 Or (6)() that you are a high school student, you should study hard. とある以上 1 When 2 Though veryよりも ひかえめ 3 Now ・すべき 4 If (7)( he is quite old, Mr. Yokota is good at playing tennis. 1 Though かなり 2 When 3 Because 4 As □ (8) She has gained weight, () she will go on a diet. gain えた 体重 1 because 2 so get 手に入れる gain 意識的に手に入れる 増加する 始める 3 or 4 if ○実施に踏み込む start 始めるという事実に焦点 30 (5) 1 (6) 3 (7) 1 (8) 2 ここがポイント though [S+V] ⇒ 「~だけれども 〜にもかかわら (一生懸命勉強したにもかかわらず, ボブは試験に合格し せんでした) but 「しかし」 (たしかに彼はここに来ましたが, しかしそれについては しませんでした) that [S+V] ⇒ 「~だということ」 (私はアメリカ人が受け取るとすぐにプレゼントを開ける だということを知りました) since [S+V] ⇒ 「~以来 〜からずっと」 (私は子供のときからレイを知っています) once [S+V] ⇒ 「いったん〜すると」 (一度始めたら, 簡単にあきらめてはいけません) now [S+V] ⇒ 「いまや~だから : 〜である以上」 (あなたが高校生である以上, 一生懸命勉強すべきです) though [S+V] ⇒ 「~だけれども ; 〜にもかかわ (かなり年をとっているにもかかわらず横田さんはテニ 上手です) so 「だから」 (彼女は体重が増えました。 だからダイエットをするて う) 3I

BかDだと思い、空所以降がorganizationsを修飾していると考えBを選んだのですが、なぜBではいけないのでしょうか？

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Yes, First, • I think 50 I have two reasons. to see it is good for tourism a lot of lights for decoration. Seeing beautiful lights contributes to relaxing As a result, tourism will be happy And tourism will come back the place again to travel. Second, safety is one of the critical factors. Many lights make us safety. For these reasons, I believe that Increasing the number of buildings and public. areas than have many lights for decoration is good.

ここの2番の書いてある意味がわからないので，一つ一つ教えて欲しいです｡

重要 xy 例題 21 内積を利用したux+vy の最大・最小問題 00000 平面上に点A(2,3)をとり、更に単位円x2+y2=1上に点P(x, y) をと る。また、原点を0とする。 2つのベクトル OA, OP のなす角を0とすると き内積 OA・OPを0のみで表せ。 (2) 実数x, y が条件 x +y2=1 を満たすとき, 2x+3yの最大値、最小値を求め 指針 [愛知教育大 〕 (1)Pは原点Oを中心とする半径1の円 (単位円) 上の点であるから |OP|=1 (2) (1)は(2)のヒント A(2,3),P(x, y) に注目すると 2 x +3y = OA・OP かくれた条件-1≦cos 0≦1 を利用して, OA・OPの最大・最小を考える。 基本11 1 章 3 ベクトルの内積 解答 OA・OP=|OA||OP|cose =√13cose (2)x2+y=1 を満たす x,y に | (1) |OA| =√22+32 = √13, |OP|=1から YA A(2,3) 内積の定義に従って計算。 対し, OP = (x,y) DA = (2,3) として2つのベ クトル OA, OP のなす角を とすると, (1) から -10 1 x 2x+3y=OA・OP=√13cos 200 20°180°より, -1≦cos≦1であるから, 2x+3y の 0=0°のとき最大, 最大値は 13 最小値は13 0=180°のとき最小。 |-|OA||OP|SOA・OP k 別解 1. 2x+3y=kとおくと 2 y= -x 3 3 Fonie |OA||OP| これをx2+y2=1 に代入し, 整理すると 13x24kx+k2-9=0 ...... ① から求めてもよい (p.612 重要例題 19 (1) 参照)。 20 xは実数であるから, xの2次方程式 ① の判別式をD xは実数であるから,x とすると D≧0 D =(-2k-13(k-9)=-9(k-13) であるから k2≦13 よって√13≦k≦√13 別解2. (x,y)= (cos 0, sin01) と表されるから 2次方程式が実数解を もつ 実数解⇔ D≧ (数学Ⅰ)である 三角関数の合成 ( 数学II) 2x+3y=2cos01+3sinA=√22+32sin(01+α)=√13sin(01+α) 3 2 ただし COS α= √13 sina= √13 1main (+α) ≦1であるから -√13≦2x+3y≦√130°≦0,<360° 2 =2を満たすとき, ax + by