【英検準1級英作文】 英検準1級の英作文を添削して頂きたいです。自分でも見直したのですが、黄色のマーカーを引いた部分が表現として合っているか分かりません。また、他にも間違えがあれば指摘して下さると嬉しいです。よろしくお願いします。

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. ise TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think print newspapers and magazines will disappear in the future? POINTS-即時性 r 好み IConsumer preferences ●Speed of news 費用対友効果 ICost effectiveness Health issues

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(レポート課題) 英文をよみ、下の問いに答えなさい。 Color can affect human mood. We have known this for a long time. Ancient Egyptians and Chinese used different colors to help sick people. No one really knows if it worked or not. But we can see today that people still think that the effect of color is important. The simplest example is the way people choose colors for their rooms. Another example is the color choice for company products. We also consider the color of clothes very carefully when we decide what to buy. Many people believe that red has a high energy level. They feel that it is connected to speed, danger, excitement, and passion. It is a good choice for a fast car, but not s0 good for a doctor's office. In that kind of place, a soft blue is thought to be better. Blue is a color that seems to help people to feel calm. In contrast to this, yellow creates feelings of happiness and cheer, and it is often used in kitchens 問 問 and bathrooms But nothing is really quite so simple. Research shows that some people get angry 問 more quicky in a yellow room. Babies seem to cry more, too. And even a soft blue, which is usually relaxing, can also make some people have sad feeling. Finally, it is important to remember that the effects of color on human mood don't alwayslast along time. In fact, the effect is usually relatively short. For example, a soft blue room may help people feel calm at first, but the effect disappears fairly soon. 問1 第2、第3段落の筆者の言いたいこと (筆者の主張) は何か。 簡潔に要約しなさい。 第1段落 色は人間の気持ちに影響を及ぼすことがある 第2段落/( 第3段落 /(名人種に対する

195番です being twice toldの場所なのですが、 なぜtwiceがbeingの後ろなのでしょうか? twiceは副詞なので、toldの後ろにはならないのですか? 写真見にくくてすみません

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2枚目下から2段落目のhis first oratorio in Englishだけを見て、 彼にとって初の英語のオラトリオなのか 彼の初めてのオラトリオが英語でかかれたのか、 どちらか特定することは可能ですか？？

The two greatest composers of the Baroque era would be George Your group is preparing a poster presentation entitled “The Greatest Baroque Frideric Handel and Johann Sebastian Bach. Handel was born in Halle, | Brandenburg-Prussia (nowGermany), in 1685. Unlike Bach, who was born 54 第5問 (配点 20) is Composer," using information from the magazine article below. rade and four fingers on ト m to be able to perform into a great musical family, Handel's father was a surgeon. rwhich he wrote severa/ apse again wathina yea. Handel composed his S Handel showed an exceptional talent in playing instruments from very early age. He learned harpsichord, violin, and organ from the organist at the Halle parish church, Friedrich Wilhelm Zachow. Zachow recognized a Handel's extraordinary talent and systematically introduced him to a diakand to give charity slist pertormed in D , but enjoyed great variety of styles of music. He also taught Handel composition. It is said L.he was invited byr th. that Handel started to compose at the age of nine. In 1702, Handel became the organist at the Calvinist Cathedral in Halle. The wage was good, but the contract was just for one year. The next sperformed and loved ba In1752, Handel co. Sal. he continued to p year, he moved to Hamburg. He was hired by the orchestra of the Hamburg Oper am Gànsemarkt as a violinist and harpsichordist. In 1705, his first opera Almira was produced. In Hamburg, he made three more operas. He was recognized as a brilliant opera composer. tan three thousand pe Handel was invited to Italy in 1706 by Gian Gastone de' Medici, who had a keen interest in opera. Rodrigo, Handel's first all-Italian opera, was produced in Florence in 1707. In 1709, he produced another opera, Agrippina in Venice. It turned out to be a huge success and ran for 27 nights successively. In Italy, he also composed oratorios like La Resurrezione and II Trionfo del Tempo e del Disinganno. The oratorio 1S a narrative musical work for singers and an orchestra., based on a story from the Bible. Handel moved to England in 1712 and decided to live there permanently (He changed his nationality in 1727.) In 1713, he composed Utrecht Te Deum and Jubilate for Queen Anne, and was granted a yearly income O1 rer ir Ag Cos reciam al the Rigral Acade scanding qpers hke Cioh demy cadsed to functh

430で、④が不正解な理由を教えてください。 （答えは③です。）

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本文2段落目の最終文、well,why can't I?はなぜわたしにはできない？いやできるでしょ！みたいな意味でしょうか？？ 〇なんで私には出来ないんだろう。 〇ヘミングウェイもできたんなら私にだってできるでしょ。 どっちなんだろうと思いました、、、 どなたか教えて下... Read More

48 B** You found the following story in a magazine. ol bon tote Hemingway and I Ryoko Yamanaka (Novelist) The author m. の Chicago Chicago 問1 Fukuoka Fukuoka の a S to be like him in the future, SoonI started to write short stories. 問2 The autho: 0 Florida O Fukuok After six years, I moved to Key West, Florida. I chose the cit.. because that was where Hemingway spent his last eight years. I majored in American literature at the university there. My future ambition was 9- linois 0 Tokyo still to be a novelist. Of course, gettinga degree in literature does not mean you can be a novelist. After graduation, I started to work in Tokyo as a journalist for an American newspaper company. Hemingway was a journalist, before he becamea novelist. He wrote about his experiences in Europe and became a best-selling author. I thought, “well, why can't I?" 問3 The at ABU For the next twenty years, I worked as ajournalist. It was a busy job. I could not afford time to write a novel. I almost gave up my childhood dream. Then, I wasin a car accident. On abed in hospital, I remembered 0 Cou 2 rea 3 wa Hemingway was heavily injured in the First World War and was sent back to America. He became a novelist after that . Fortunately, I could move my hands. I started to write novels again. At the age of 45, my first novel was published. So far, I have written five novels, all of which have been favorably accepted, luckily. I should never be a literary master like Hemingway, but at least, my ambition since childhood was fulfilled. Route A r park dos en