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Some people say that people today should spend less time using the Internet. Do you agree with this opinion?と言う質問に対して、

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Yes,I do.I have two reasons.
First, my friends and my mother often said 「Internet is the most useful.」But, I don't think about it. Because,we should use a dictionary or a book and so on. There are more useful than Internet.
Moreover, we must not to rely Internet all. For examle, our grandfather or our teacher's story are important too.I have one grandmother, and she always talked many things to me. It is the most interesting.
That's why I think that people today should spend less time using the Internet.