Question

Neko

ライティングの添削をお願いします。
アドバイスもらえると嬉しいです。

Topic Do you think that more people will take language lessons on the internet.

I think that more people will take language lessons on the internet. I have two reasons. First, language lessons on the internet are convenient. If there are no language teachers in their neighborhood, they can connect with a teacher that lives in for places. Second, taking online lessons can save their time. They don't have to go far place to take it. In conclusion, I consider that the number of people, who take language lessons on the internet, will increase.

Answer 1

るぅ

ひとつ目の理由、If there areで始まる文ですが、最後のlive in for placesはどのような意味で書かれましたか？

2つ目の理由、They don’t haveの文
→ They don’t have to go to a faraway place to take one.

Neko

添削ありがとうございます！
ひとつ目の理由は、live in ＜far＞ places　と書いたつもりでした…
a faraway place の表現、勉強になりました！