Question

心愛

添削お願いしたいです！

拙い点あるかと思いますが、文法ミスや変な言い回し等あれば教えて頂きたいです。

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Find out where we
now.
are
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that
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2016年(前期)
英
語
問 題
2016年(前期)
英
語
問
題
Chris:
(B )(10 to 20 words)
Living Room
Middle Room
Kitchen
Door
Kim:
What? Are you joking? That's really (
C )!! (1 word)
O
Table
Chris:
Well, how about ( D ) (10 to 20 words)
Kim:
I like the idea. Let's try that!!
Richard's Seat
Kitty's Seat
D
Situation:
The map below indicates where Chris and Kim are currently
Door
located. They started at the Camp Office and originally planned
Living Room
Middle Room
Kitchen
to go to the Mountain Hut, but they did not make it there.
Directions: In 80 words or less, describe the route that you think they took to
Table
get to where they are now.
In your description, include two
occasions where they failed to follow a route that would have
Richard's Seat
Kitty's Seat
taken them to the Mountain Hut. (NOTE: The map does not
show which way is north.)
V Follow the directions for (1) and (2) below. All answers must be written in
English.(配点25 点)
THEY ARE HERE!
No Trail
|Road
Low Hills
Tall Mountain
Situation:
Two friends, Chris and Kim, find that they are lost after walking
for a long time in a forest. They have no maps, no phones, and
no clear memory of the point at which they lost their way.
Mw
white Rver M
M
My
Boat House
Directions: Complete the conversation below by filling in the blanks ( A )
Old
Bridgé
ロ
to( D).The number of words used in each blank should be
Railroad Tracks
Tall Tree
within the word limits indicated.
Big
Lake
Chris:
I guess it's safe to say that we're lost. What should we do now?
Kim:
(A )(10 to 20 words)
Chris:
No, that's not going to workK because we do not have the right stuff)
Camp
Ofce
Mountain
Hut
Kim:
You're right. That's not a very good idea.
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Answer 1

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るぅ

1) A 文法に間違いはありませんが、次に来るChrisのセリフがworkやright stuffとあるので、何か作るのかと思いました。解答例はそんなことなかったですかね？
B, C, Dいいと思います。

2) 2行目camp officeの前にはtheが必要です。
6行目はacrossがいいですね。walk across <the> old bridge
two mistakes が何かはっきりわからないのが気になりますが、よく書けていると思います。

それにしても、どうやったらそんなところに迷い込めるのか笑える問題です。

心愛

解答ですーー
適当なものがないなぁ、という意味を持つっぽいです。。。なので、私の標識を探すという解答はダメっぽいです泣🙅‍♀️

恥ずかしながらライトと読み違えて、明かりがないから見えない、と謎の夜設定としてしまいました(T_T)

心愛

two mistakes が何かはっきりわからないのが気になります

明確には言えてないですね、、、thenでやっつけで繋いだだけなので、、、気をつけます！

るぅ

Aはそうですね、workやらstuffとあったので、解答例のように火を焚いたり煙を出したりなどしないとってことですね。

心愛

そうですね、、、！