Question

彩領

英語添削お願いします。学校で英語面接があるので英文を考えたのでお願いします。

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2022年7月12日 21:42
Today, many animals are in danger of extinction.
Do you think people are doing enough to protect
endangered animals?
No. It's becuse the number of endangered animals is
increasing around the world due to deforestation.
2
There days, many students are taking lessons ontside
of school. Do you think it is a good idea?
No. I think that taking lessons outside of school has a
bad effect on students. It's because if they take online
lessons for a long time, your eyesight will get worse.
3
It is often said that children today spend too much time
playing video games. Do you think children should
spend less time on video game?
No. I think video games have a bad effect on
children. It's because they don't study hard, their eyes
get worse, and they don't play outside.
SO
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Answer 1

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taka

よくできています。若干の修正を加えれば、更に良くなると思います。

1. 〇　→　◎No, I don’t think so. That’s because the number of endangered animals has been increasing due to deforestation.

2. → No, I don’t think so. I am afraid that taking lessons outside of school has a bad effect on students. That’s because if they take online lessons for a long time, their eyesight will get worse.

3. → Yes, I think so. Video games have a bad effect on children. That’s because they don’t study hard, their eyes get worse, and they don’t play outside, which is very good for their health.
※質問：Do you think children should spend less time on video games?(子供たちはビデオゲームで遊ぶ時間をもっと減らすべきだと思いますか？)を誤解していませんか？

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