Question

りぼん

英作文を書いたので間違っているところがないか添削して頂きたいです！よろしくお願いします。

Q
Date
Some people say that Japan should accept more
people from other countries to work in Japan.
'Do`
you agree
agree with this opinion?
意見と理由2つ
I agree with this opinion. I have two reasons for this.
First, we can learn other Countries cultures.
Second, it is important for us to study other.
countries languages.

英作文

Answer 1

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taka

このままでも十分だと思いますが、若干の修正をすれば完璧かな？！

I agree with this opinion. 〇　→ ◎ Yes, I agree with this opinion. ← Do you ～?に対してYes/Noを明確にする
I have two reasons for this. 〇
First, we can learn other countries' cultures. 〇
Second, it is important for us to study other countries languages. →　Second, it is important for us to study their languages.
※other countries を避けるため

参考にしてください。

りぼん

ありがとうございます！間違いのない英作文が書けるように頑張ります！

taka

My pleasure!😊
Practice makes perfect.