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よろしくお願いします。

Q Some young people live with their parents even after they
finish their education. Do you think the number of
such people will increase in the future?
意見と理由2つ
I think the number of such people
will increase in
reasons for this.
the future. I have two
First, it is convenient for young people to live with
their parents. They do not have to housework.
Second, they do. not worry about money.

Answer 1

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ナポリタン3世

最後の文は、They do not need to worry about money.にした方がいいですね。
それぐらいだと思います！

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ありがとうございます！
とても助かりました🙏