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TOPIC
Some people do one kind of job in the daytime and do a different job at night. Do you think the number of such people will increase in the future?
POINTS
Health
Income
Work life balance
No, I think people do one kind of job in the daytime and different jobs at night will not increase in the future. Firstly, working all day is not only not good for our health but also our mental. For example, we could not sleep enough time we have a headache, or feel uncomfortable. Generally speaking, it will not good impact on our health. Secondly, when they do not feel good, their work-life balance is broken we spend much time for walking, we decrease the time which is free. Therefore I think people who work all day will not increase in the future.
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