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英語
高校生
英検準一級英作文問題
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Suggested length 120ー150 words
TOPIC
Do you think that it is desirable for stores to stay open 24 hours a day?
POINTS
Effect on workers
Effect on environment
Customer needs
Profit
自分の意見
I disagree with the idea that it is desirable for stores to stay open 24 hours a day. I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, store that is open 24 hours is not good for environment. If it close few hours to rest, it would save more energy.
Second of all, store that open 24 hours causes bad influence on workers. If it keeps store opening 24 hours, the workers would be very tired. By doing this they take too many stress and have very low motivation. This means that the workers condition get worse and their sales is bad or ineffective.
According to these reasons, I think that the stores which open 24 hours ought to be stopping and need to rest for workers.
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