文法とかおかしいところありますか？？I want to see the aurora in the future.
Because my mother went to Canada when she was high school student and she told me it was very beautiful, so you should see !
And I like science very much, so I want to know why aurora have many conditions,for example sunny, no moonlight,long night and so on.
If I can make aurora in japan ,I can make a lot of people happy! I think this is good idea to use science.
So, I want to see aurora with my own eyes, this is also good for me to learn science.
But now, I have no money, because I’m student , and when I will be adult, I want to go Canada with my family , so I want to save my money from now.
And I would like to compare various aurora from around the world.
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第2文Because my mother went to Canada when she was high school student and she told me it was very beautiful, so you should see !ですが、
Becauseとsoで意味が重なっているのでどちらかを削除するべきと思いました。
Becauseやsoを用いると、理由と結論という関係性がはっきりするので、thenやandより良いと思います。
問題点としては、Becauseと(接続詞の)soの両方を同じ文の中で使ってはいけない、使うならどちらか一方のみ、ということです(分かりにくくて済みません)
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thenとかandとかの方がいいですかね？