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問題
Some people say that the number of cars in cities should be limited.Do you agree with this idea?

Yes,| do.There are two
reasonSs.Firstnawdays the number of the
traffic accidents by car is
increasing.Especiallymany children injure
and die every year.lt makes many
parents sad.Second,the gas that cars
produce is bad effect for the
environment.We should try to decrease
the bad effect.There are many thengs
that we can do.For example,we dont use
a car aS DoSSsible when we can walk.Such
a little effort is the best way to protect the
environment.For these reasons,Ihink that
the number of cars in cities should be
limited.