添削お願いします🙇🏻‍♀️՞ 1枚目が問題で2枚目が自分の解答です-`🙌🏻´-

3 次の英文は,正太(Shota)とマーク (Mark) との会話である。会 の (1) (2) 会話の流れが自然になるように,次 の中に, それぞれ7語以上の英語を補いなさい。 (4点) Shota : Hi, Mark. Let's go to the sea next week. Mark: OK. Let's go there by bike because (1) Shota: I understand, but using a train is better. If we use a train, J'abib I tud (2) Mark: I see. adtombng2ymbolIq orld

(3)長文問題の一部です そのこと は、なぜ、The thingではなく、Thatなのですか？ A. That makes the trains more beautiful.

2 次の英文は,高校生の和樹 (Kazuki) とフィリピン (the Philippines) 出身のベン (Ben) との鉄道 (railway) に関する会話である。 この英文を読んで (1)~(6)の問いに答えなさい。(16点) Kazuki : I hear you like railways. I like railways, too. Ben : Really? Yes! I'm *especially interested in Japanese railways because old Japanese trains are running in the Philippines. Kazuki: Old Japanese trains? A Ben : Yes. Some Japanese people enjoyed watching the old Japanese trains and taking pictures of them in the Philippines. Kazuki: That ( @ ) nice! Ben : Many old Japanese trains are running in some other countries, too. Japanese trains are popular because of their good "quality. Kazuki Our trains are loved "abroad! B Also, I think "reusing things is good. Ben : That's right. Some trains are reused in Japan, too. Kazuki : Oh, really? Ben : Yes. Some of the old trains from the Hibiya Line in Tokyo are now running on the *Hokuriku Rail Road. Kazuki I see. I didn't know that! Ben : One of my good friends likes railways, too. He told me about it ( Kanazawa with him. ) I went to Kazuki: The trains on the Hibiya Line have a *silver *design, right? Ben : Yes, but it "changed. Now it's an orange design. It's the *symbolic color of the Hokuriku Rail Road. Kazuki : Railway lines have their own colors. The symbolic colors of the *Ainokaze Toyama Railway are blue and green. Ben : Blue is the *image of the sea and green is the image of nature like mountains and trees, right? Kazuki: Yes. The designs on the *left and right sides of the train have different colors. Did you know that? Ben : No, I didn't. ( (C) ) are they different? Kazuki : If you look at the side with the blue design, you can see the sea in the *background of the train. If you look at the side with the green design, you can see the mountains in the background of the train. Ben : Wonderful! The design of each side of the train and its background have the same image. I want to take pictures of the trains with the beautiful background.

合っていますか？ まとまっていますかね？

I think that studying English is interesting not interesting). <2550TEĽ. A B Because English is world. So it _10 difficalt for Very important around the useful. Learning English me. But 1 20 want fo talk foreign people around the world.

日本語にしてほしいです

Hi! I want to tell you something. I went to a restaurant with my family yesterday. I wanted to eat delicious Italian food there, but the real reason for my visit was different. I wanted to see robot servers there, and I was excited to see them. I think using robots to carry dishes at restaurants has some good points. Do you think such robots will increase in the future? Your friend, Alex

問７の作文で「歩きスマホを解決するためにできること」について４文以上の文を書いたのですが、 文法や単語が合っているかみて欲しいです。

問6 A 問7 I'll make B 7 Posters CP D T about these problems. It shows us using smart phones while walking Is dangerous. When people see the poster, they'll stop using their smartphone. I want more people to know these problems.

英作文の添削お願いします 下線部(6)はWe have to live in a nature-friendly way. です

ア because イ but ウ though I until 6 下線部(6)について、 自然環境に優しい生活を送るために, あなたが普段行っていること,ま たはこれから行おうと思うことは何ですか。 まとまりのある5文程度の英語で書きなさい。

文法やスペルに間違いがないか添削お願いします🙇🏻‍♀️´-

because First, we don't have to have 6 Lavy bags on Online shopping. Second, 12 We Can buy everything In the 18 house just have computers or smartphone 24 It is SO convenient. 30 36

(1) (2) (3) の問題解説して欲しいです。

(1)本文の空欄 A にあてはまるように、次のア~エの英文を正しく並べ替えましょう。 (まとまりのある文章を構成する力] ア My father looked very sad when he heard what she said. イ Two weeks later, he sold his boat. 【4点】 ウ After we arrived at San Juan Island, my mother looked at my father. エ My mothers said to the father, "You must sell the boat when we go home.” [ ]-[ ]→[] (2) 次のア~キの7つの英文を Eric の物語の流れに合うように正しく並べかえましょう。 物語の概要を読み取る力&まとまりのある文章を構成する力] ア They saw many whirlpools and some water came into the boat. 【6点 (完全解)】 イ Eric's mother got angry and said to the father, “You must sell the boat.” エ オカキ When Eric was a Junior High School student, his father bought a small motorboat. One day, his family was going to San Juan Island on the motorboat. Two weeks later, his father sold his boat. To get to San Juan Island, they must go between two other islands. His father laughed and said, “We did it! That was exciting!" [ 14[ ] [ J[ ] [ ][] (3) 本文を読み、 次の質問に英語で答えましょう。 物語のポイントを正確に読み取る力] 【各3点 ① How did he get to San Juan Island?uid ② How long did it take to go from Seattle to San Juan Island? ③ Why was it dangerous? ④ What did Eric's mother say to his father? I carfW. W

英検の英作文問題です。 間違っているところがあれば教えていただきたいです。

6 あなたは、 外国人の知り合いから以下の QUESTION をされました。 QUESTION について,あなたの意見とその理由を2つ英文で書きなさい。 語数の目安は50語~ 60 語です。 解答は,次のページの解答欄に書きなさい。 解答が QUESTION に対応していないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあ ります。 QUESTION をよく読んでから答えてください。 QUESTION What is the best age to start using a smartphone?

根気強く英文読める方お願いします🙏 この問題の(2)は合っているでしょうか。 違うのなら違う理由も教えてくれるととても嬉しいです😭お願いします

TREK [3] 9分 10 2935 受験 難問 次の英文を読んで、あとの(1)~(3)の問いに答えなさい。('13 神奈川県) Brian is a high school student from America. He joins a *volunteer club at school. Last Sunday he went to a "nursing home with his friends to teach the old people living there about computers. Mr. Doi, one of the old people there, is talking with Brian in a room at the nursing home. sdgoon 5 Mr. Doi: Hello, I am Kazuo Doi. Nice to meet you. Thank you for coming today. Nice to meet you, too. My name is Brian. What can I do for you, Mr. Doi? Brian Mr. Doi: Can you teach me how to send e-mails, Brian? Brian Mr Doi : Brian Of course, I can. Do you want to send an e-mail to anyone? Yes. One of my friends lives in a nursing home in Hokkaido. I have not seen her for a long time, but she sent me a "postcard last summer. She wrote her *e-mail address on the postcard. I want to send her an e-mail to say "Hello," but I don't know how to do it. salad : Don't worry, Mr. Doi. It is not difficult to send an e-mail. Tellsafi Two days later, Brian and his friend Yumi are talking in their classroom. 15 Yumi Brian Yumi Brian : 20 Yumi : Brian, I hear you went to a nursing home last Sunday, right? : Yes. I went there to do *volunteer work with my friends. : That's great. What did you do there? odon of d We taught the old people living there about computers. They were very glad to learn how to use computers. What did you teach them about computers? I taught some old people how to send e-mails. Mr. Doi was one of them and Brian : his English was good. Read this e-mail from him. He sent it to me yesterday. Brian and Yumi are reading the e-mail from Mr. Doi. Hello, Brian, 100 living here enjoy it. I am sending this e-mail with a picture of me *in front of a microphone." Her e-mail was *encouraging to me. Now I have found an important thing to me. It is to try new things. When I find a new thing to try, I will send you an e-mail again. 35 Kazuo Doi After reading the e-mail from Mr. Doi, Yumi and Brian are talking again. Yumi Mr. Doi enjoys *communication by e-mail. Brian Yes. I'm very happy to hear that. Yumi You did a good thing, Brian. 40 Brian Yumi Brian 45 Yumi : Brian Yumi 50 Brian Yumi 55 Brian T Thank you for coming last Sunday. Do you remember my friend who sent me a postcard with her e-mail address? After I sent her an e-mail, she sent me an e-mail back soon. Using e-mail is a lot of fun. In her e-mail she said, "Now I am trying a new thing in my nursing home. I am *in charge of an announcement over the PA system for 10 minutes in the morning. During this time, I read the *newspaper of the day and make some *comments. Many people Yumi Thank you, Yumi. I went to the nursing home to teach the old people there about computers, but I also learned something there. : What is it, Brian? Mr. Doi knew his friend was in charge of an announcement over the PA system, and then he started to think about trying a new thing, too. I know. Mr. Doi says, "encouraging" in his e-mail. Right. When I taught him how to send e-mails, he said, "I have wanted to learn a lot of things. Using e-mail is one of them." I see. You want to say the e-mail from his friend made him more *positive, right? That's right. First, Mr. Doi learned how to send e-mails and wrote an e-mail to his friend. Next, he got an e-mail from his friend and knew his friend was trying a new thing. Now Mr. Doi ( ) to him. Mr. Doi thinks that it is to try new things. We can say it is good to know how our friends are doing. It is wonderful to *communicate with other people, Brian. : I think so, too. Communicating with other people can make people more positive. I learned that from volunteer work in the nursing home. : I hope that Mr. Doi can find a new thing to try. Please tell me when you get an e-mail from him again. (注) volunteer club ボランティアクラブ nursing home 老人ホーム send〜 〜を送る postcard 絵はがき e-mail address 電子メールアドレス (約 685 語) volunteer work ボランティア活動 in charge of an announcement over the PA system 館内放送を担当して comments コメント in front of a microphone マイクの前の communication by e-mail 電子メールによるコミュニケーション communicate with ~ ~とコミュニケーションをとる newspaper encouraging 励みになる positive 前向きな