添削お願いします💝

Although a friendly letter should be light-hearted and avoid familiar complaints and personal problems, there are times when you have to tell bad news. Don't use the shock approach. Prepare the reader with some introductory hints, then tell the full story, so your letter won't give the impression that there is worse to come. [全文訳】 親しみのこもった手紙は快活な内容が良く、ありふれた不平および個人的な 問題は避けるべきであるが, 悪い知らせを伝えなければならないときもある。 (そん なときは) 動揺を与える知らせ方をしてはいけない。 読む人があなたの手紙でもっと 悪い話があるという印象を受けないように, (読む人に) いくつか前置きとなるヒン トを与えて心の準備をさせてから全部を伝えなさい。 33 33

英検2級のライティング添削お願いします。アドバイス等もお願いします

以下の英文を読んで その内容を45~55語の英語で要約し, 解答欄に記入しなさい。 解答は、解答用紙のB面にある英文要約解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、解答欄の外 に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が英文の要約になっていないと判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることが あります。英文をよく読んでから答えてください。 Nowadays, consumers have become increasingly concerned about various environmental issues across different industries. Within these trends, reducing wrapping materials has attracted particular attention. Recently, more businesses have begun adopting this policy. What are the benefits of this? Reducing wrapping materials significantly lowers the overall environmental impact. Fewer wrapping materials mean less waste is created and fewer natural resources are consumed. Additionally, decreasing wrapping materials can ease the financial burden on producers. It leads to lower production costs and allows companies to offer their products at more reasonable prices to consumers. However, reducing wrapping materials does have some drawbacks. Products could suffer quality issues because wrapping materials help protect them from damage during transportation. Moreover, reducing the amount of wrapping paper may result in consumers having to pay for wrapping when buying gifts and other items. Thus, some people find this annoying and inconvenient.

この文で（1）になぜinがはいるのですか？私はonだと思いました。 onを選んだ理由は、歴史の上にあるって思ったからです。

There are 1.42 million lakes in the world, and 62% of them are in Canada. Along with these many lakes are thousands of rivers. Today, 70% of North America's large rivers without dams are in Canada. In short, (A) Canada is covered by a lot of water. If you think about how much water there is in Canada, it is not surprising that a small boat, called a canoe, a big role ( 1 ) the history and development of the has played a big role country. 19~ 1980 role small boat with an open top that can move quickly and (B)-

英文の文型の問題なのですが、前置詞句を（ ）でくくってMにするということは分かったのですが副詞と形容詞の判断の仕方がわかりません。形容詞は何となくものの程度を表す？と思っているのですがどのように判断したら良いですか？

Life on earth began in water, billions of years ago, and water sustains all life today. It cycles about endlessly, from rain to streams, from streams to rivers and from rivers to the seas. Sea water rises to the atmosphere as water vapor, then forms clouds in the cooler air and falls to earth again as rain. (関西学院大) 7 前置詞句は M になる 前の課の英文よりも長くて複雑そうですが,早速検討していきましょう。 太字になっている名詞 earth, water などの前にある on, in などの語は前置詞と れます。なぜなら、まさに名詞や代名詞、名詞と同じ働きをする語群(=名詞句・名 詞節)の「前に」 「置く」 「詞(ことば)」だからです。 on や in などの前置詞は,単独では何の働きもできません。 例えば、冒頭の例 Life on earth ... の on earth のように, 前置詞が 〈前置詞+名詞>の形で名詞を捕まえ て支配下に入れ、 前置詞句となって初めてM(修飾語) になります。 また, ここでの earth のように, 前置詞の支配下に入った名詞 (相当語句)を前置詞の目的語と呼びます。 前置詞句を( )に入れてSVを発見しよう 〈前置詞+名詞〉は,文中で形容詞句として名詞を修飾し、また副詞句として動詞･ 形容詞などを修飾しますが,このことが文を複雑に見せます。したがって、前置詞+ 名詞)を( )に入れて取り除くと, SVの発見はぐっと容易になります。冒頭の 題で試してみましょう。 4 [第1文 生命はの上の地球 生じたの中で 水 前に 何十億(のもの)からなる年 Life(on earth) began (in water), billions (of years) ago, S M Vi M そして 水は の生命を維持しているすべての生物 今日 and water sustains all life today. (等) S Vt (形) (副) M (副)

問4の⑤の計算はどうすれば合うのですか。 教えてください🙇‍♀️ 3枚目が答えです。

次の英文を読んで,下の設問に答えなさい。 Last year, 4.2 million babies died. That is the most recent number reported by UNICEF of deaths before the age of one, worldwide. We often see lonely and emotionally charged numbers like this in the news or in the materials of activist groups or organizations. They produce a reaction. Who can even imagine 4.2 million dead babies? It is so terrible, and even worse when we know that almost all died from easily preventable diseases. And how can anyone argue that 4.2 million is anything other than a huge number? You might think that nobody would even try to argue (that, but you would be wrong. That is exactly why I mentioned this number. Because it is not huge: it is beautifully small. If we even start to think about how tragic each of these deaths is for the parents who had waited for their newborn to smile, and walk, and play, and instead had to bury their baby, then this number could keep us crying for a long time. But who would be helped by these tears? Instead let's think clearly about human suffering. The number 4.2 million is for 2016. The year before, the number was 4.4 million. The year before that, it was 4.5 million. Back in 1950, it was 14.4 million. That's almost 10 million more dead babies per year, compared with today. Suddenly this terrible number starts to look smaller. In fact (2)the number has never been lower. Of course, I am the first person to wish the number was even lower and falling even faster. But to know how to act, and how to prioritize resources, nothing can be more important than doing the cool-headed math and realizing what works and what doesn't. And this is clear: more and more deaths are being prevented. comparing the numbers. (3). We would never realize that without

間違っているものを選ぶのですが分からないので教えていただきたいです。🙇‍♂️

[al- The importance of documentaries is linked to a notion of the The philosopher John Dewey argued public as a social phenomenon. persuasively that the public so crucial to the health of a democratic society is not just individuals added up. A public is a group of people [b]. [c]. who can act together for the public good and so can challenge the deep- seated power of business and government. It is an informal body that can [d] come together in a crisis if necessary. There are as many publics as there are occasions and issues to call them forth. We can all be members of any if we have a way to communicate each other about the particular public [e]= shared problems we face. Communication, therefore, is the soul of the public.

７番の上の文にhave saidとあるのですが、なぜsaidではないのですか？

(As a result), veteran players face difficulties later in life (due to S V especially problems [with their brains]). O injuries, 因果表現 The c IR 語句 難に直面するのである。 as a result 結果として / veteran 形 経験豊かな文字どおり「ベテランの」です。/ face ■ 直面する/later in life のちの人生で / due to ~ ~が原因で/injury ③ 損傷/especially とりわけ (In recent years), some coaches of American football have said, “I will not let my children play football." 0 C S S V その結果,ベテラン選手たちはのちの人生において,損傷、特に脳疾患による困 JR Also is co IR 近年, アメリカンフットボールのコーチの中には 「私は自分の子どもには絶対に アメリカンフットボールをさせない」 と言っている人もいる。 語句 recent 最近の / coach 名コーチ/let 人 原形 人に~させる 7 American football and soccer have several similarities: both played (on a S rectangular field), (outdoors), (in all kinds ather) T F

水は酸素と水素からできてるって見た目ではわからないのに、なんでここではofをつかうんですか？

1025. Water is made up (of) hydrogen and oxygen. 頻出 with 1 2 of 33 Jim's class consisted of 46 students. from ④ by (福岡大) mul abiesd babyd

31番が分かりません、、😭😭 ほかも答えと理由合ってますでしょうか😭😭

2 次の英文の下線部には誤っている箇所が1箇所ある。 その番号を選び, 正しい形に直しなさい。 31. The United Nations decided to give food aid to African nations, but problems remain to deal. .at more serious ② 〈名古屋外国語大〉

黄色の部分がどういう意味なのかを教えてもらいたいです！🙇🏻‍♀️一枚目は一つ前の文章です

Shirakawa Yuko talks in a magazine about what it is like to be a nurse in a war zone. I work as a nurse for MSF. First, let me tell you why I joined MSF. I went through most of my high school years without having any idea what I wanted to do with my life. In the fall of my last year, a friend told me she would go to nursing school. "I want to be a nurse, too!" I burst out spontaneously. The entrance exams were only four months away, but I was now determined to become a nurse. I studied very earnestly and passed the examination. G1 I already knew about MSF, having seen a TV program about it when I was a little girl. I even dreamed of joining it one day. That dream came back to me after I worked as a nurse for several years. In order to join MSF, I had to be able to speak 15 English fluently. So, I decided to study in Australia. There I worked hard to improve my English, and after that I acquired more nursing experience. Then I was finally accepted by MSF. no in a Zene 5 I