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ぷりん🍮

「友人を映画に誘うときのメール」という題の英作文なのですが誰か添削してくれませんか？

I hope you are doing well today .
I talked you about the movie that I was going to go with my friend .
But my friend can’t go with me for some reasons.
So would you like to go to see it with me ?
If you are ok please tell me as soon as possible .
Thank you for your time .

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taka

I hope you are doing well today. → Hi, how are you today? を最初に言ってから、I hope you doing well. の方がベターです。　
I [talked you] about the movie that I was going to [go] with my friend.
→ I [talked to] you about the movie that I was going to [see] with my friend.
※✕talk＋人 → talk to/with＋人　人に／と話す
But my friend can’t go with me for some reasons. → 〇
So would you like to go to see it with me? → 〇
If you are [ok] please tell me as soon as possible.
→ If you are [OK][,] please tell me/let me know as soon as possible. ※OKは大文字が原則 let me know(私に知らせる)も可
Thank you for your time. → 〇

以上、参考にしてください。

ぷりん🍮

文法的なことが自信がなかったので訂正していただけて本当にありがたいです！
今回の期末テストでは原型不定とかが範囲なのでこの表現で書いてみたいと思います！
明日テストなのでこれで頑張ります！！

taka

You're welcome!😊
Go for it!