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英検2級のライティングです。

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Year.
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Ln some Japorese univercity
No.
from
Do }
One
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a broad
Po you think unirersiy s Tndents
must
for
study abroad?
Dato
should
agree with the / opinion thauhiversity stndents Shoul4S tudy a brood I ag
1
for
Ohe
Year.
SCore
There
are
why I think SO.
ナwo reasons
of all, if
There
First
they Cd Study abrond for one year
Firsi
Eike
Vhey are going to Speak and writing English well.
So, they wil/ have a wonderful future .
Because, Some large Companies have fo Speak English well
In Short, Eng|ish
Second of a/ ナhey bppPortunity to 1earh new value Of
abroad peoples and expand their horiz0ns.
In adition
wre
En
So
use a 1ot of places and Scene .
a
I
they get to know Yonrself deeply
0
They
So, they are able to
Also, almost
Smile wher first meeting pepples
are g00ng to find ナheir Strengths and weakhesses.
S
great grow human
human .
Japohese peoples Can mt tolk actively and keep
ale to make riends quicky
But, almost abroad peoples are
and nature
So, they are going to 2axt goring ta 900d affect .
g0od aftect
I dg reb with the opinion
It is
for these
two reasons that
that wniversity stufents abroad for one year.
should study
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