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Thanks to improvements in information technology, it is m
t0 work outside the office. Do you think the number of
doing so will increase in the future?
オフィスの外で動
何ができるよう
OINTS
か, そして何
Eficiency ● Time
● Communication
くなるかを、

I think the number of people working outside the office wil
increase in the füture,I have Two reasons uhy I think so. To begin
with,
between
communicate with Their family long Time. In addi7ion, they are
able To
ther can work in their house. These deys, the comnunication
Jf They work at house, they will
family is decreasing.
Save the time.
Far instance, when they ride cars,
f people deing So will increase in the future.
By using The Internet, they work during moving.
That is uhy I think the mumber
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