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QUESTION
Which do you think is better for people, borrowing books from
libraries or buying books at stores?
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I think borrowing books from libraries for people
I better than buying books at stores.
First, the libraries can borrow the books for free.
It is important for many people to save money.
Second, To use
between we and local people
Thus, I think borrowing books from libraries for
people than buying books at stores
library is conectting communication