Question

kina

添削をお願いします

B あなたは留学生の Isabel から次の相談を受けた。英文を読み, 空所にふさわしい形で,
Isabel の妹はどうすればよいかを, その理由とともに30語程度の英語で書け。 ただし,
2文以上になってもかまわない。
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Answer 1

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taka

内容は、このままでOKです。但し、若干のミスは訂正が必要です。

Your younger sister should study in the morning. 〇　
If she sleep well every night, she will study hard more. →　If she sleeps well every night, she will be able to study harder.
※sleep → sleeps hard more → harder
I think you should told her that. → I think you should tell her that.
※told → tell

以上です。

kina

ありがとうございます!!!
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taka

You're welcome!