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les, time Uslhg the Internet
I haye tho reasons or that.
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her. will not . play outside
hrealth ret to
Second, using Ihterhet too much tme matestheik Colpmuhicatich
skils worse .
pople
In concluaion
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I think thot if is bad for iheik
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I thak that
people oght no to use Intethet
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TOPIC
me
Some people say that people today should spend less time using the
Internet. Do you agree with this opinion ?
thet people
I aghee mth the qpinon
pend less
ave tro easehs wiy
POINTS
● Communication dayldehd less time ug th
tne
I the
Education
Inter net.
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is bad for their heelfh