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[4] Some of university, students:
choose to join
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internships. has benefis,
such as being able to know more
about companies; and encouraging
each other both during and after
the it. On the other hand, they
may not be able to understand the job.
or may find it difficult to do well
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in their studies. 55
is said that famous tourist sites,
How should
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limit the number of visitors.
I agree with this opinion
I have two reasons why I think so. 31
First, It can protect nature. If the number
of them decreases, garbages will be increased by
the them, and as a result, the place's
charm will become bad. Second, they
saves a lot of time. This is because
they don't have to wait there for a
long time, and by doing so they will
have a good time.
For these reasons that I mentioned,
I believe that famous tourist sites,
The number of visitors.
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• should limit