Question

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英検２級の英文要約の添削をして欲しいです。明日英検なのにも関わらず、型を覚えていないので型を教えていただけるとありがたいです🙏問題は下の文章です。

Reading has been an important human activity for a long time. Just 50 years ago, most people had to buy physical books to read. However, nowadays, some people prefer reading e-books instead of traditional paper books.
E-books are convenient. They can be read on devices like smartphones, tablets, or e-readers, offering several advantages.
People can carry thousands of books on one device, making it easy to read anytime, anywhere. E-books also allow users to adjust the font size or brightness, making reading more comfortable. In addition, e-books are often cheaper than printed books, and some can even be downloaded for free.
However, there are some downsides. Staring at a screen for a long time can cause eye strain, and some readers miss the feeling of holding a physical book. Additionally, e-books depend on technology, so without a charged device or access to the internet, reading might be difficult.

Recently, many people like to read e-books.
It has benefits, such as it is able to carry many books on one device
and buy cheaper than paper books.
However, their eyes are damaged by screen bright.
and it is difficult to read e-books without the Internet.

英検

Answer 1

ウッズ

よく書けています！英検終わってしまったかもしれませんが、今後のため回答します

添削は次の3点
1.recentlyは過去形または完了形とともに使います。時制を変えるか、nowadays / these daysなどにするとよいです
2.such as の後は名詞が来ます。for example にするか、asの後を名詞にするかしてください
3.brightは形容詞。light,またはbrightnessにする

型について、5番の自由英作と異なり特定の型はありませんが、導入、メリット、デメリットの3つの構成でいいとおもいます。
それよりも、問題文をいかに言い換えられるか、例えば単語を言い換える、受動態など構文入れ替える、などが求められます。
あなたの文章はそれができているため、そこは概ね問題ないかとも思われます。