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If I met a famous person, I wanted to meet Mr.Sanma Akashiya. This is because I become feel a very good when I watch his varieties. I think his communication skill is too high. So talk is very interesting. In addition he is gentle for everyone. His attitude is famous in Japan. They is call a attitude like a god. So he will kind for me ,if I met him.

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If I could meet a famous person, I want to meet Mr........... This is because I feel really good when I watch his varieties. Also I think his communication skills are great and interesting. Furthermore, he is kind to everyone and his attitude are famous in Japan. This is called a god attitude. So I think he will be very kind if I met him.

はどうでしょうか?

hanna

ありがとうございます!

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これは過去形じゃないよね?まだ会ってないよね?
そう言うことでいい?
だとしたらif節は過去形じゃなくて現在形
だからmetはmeet, wantedはwant
This is becauseは that's because
I'll feel very good
So talking with him is very interesting
They is callの所は何が言いたいかわかんない
最後のif節も現在形

hanna

ありがとうございます!

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