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上の英文を下のように添削する、 という問題なのですが、添削した箇所はあっていますか？

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High school students should Join a volunteer.
The volnnteer give them experiences which are
useful to them mn the future and  a good
relationship between them and people with whom
they hardly talk.  Young people today tend to

avoid a person witG wDom they don't need to be

HmVolved、The volunteer is one of solutions of this
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