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Do you agree to each of the following topics or not?Write your own opinions.

Answer 2.
I think it is wrong. If my parents didn’t want a girl and got an abortion, I wouldn’t be here. It's so frightening. So I believe that it is a type of murder if you get an abortion because of the sex of the baby.
Answer 3.
My mother has a chronic disease, and my grandma is 75 years old. So in an emergency, they can’t take refuge without help. If I prioritized my own life and they die because of it, I would regret my action. Therefore I want to help other people any time even if they are elderly or weak.

この、answer2と3の文章の添削をお願いします。

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Answer 1

✨ Best Answer ✨

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if my parents had not wanted a girl and got〜
frightening, and i think it can be considered as a kind of murder if parents get an abortion just because of the sex of their fetus.

Since my mother〜 , my grandmother〜old, in case of emergency, they cannot 〜 refuge by themselves.
If I prioritized my life and they lost their lives, 〜
Therefore, I would like to help whoever is in need of help so that I will not repent.

ミスは
➀仮定法過去完了わすれ
➁babyは生まれたあと（細かいけど…）
➂grandmaは口語
➃Soも
➄省略形も

あとは文の繋がりが不自然な箇所が少しありますが概ね大丈夫だと思います。Soはほかの接続詞とか副詞（thereforeや hence)で書き換えると良いです

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Question の内容を載せるのを忘れてました

Question 2.Now we can preselect the sex of a baby.Is it the right thing to do?

Question 3.which should we choose,to help the elderly and weak,or to prioritize our own lives?