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おかき

英検準二級の作文です。アドバイスなどがあればお願いします🙇‍♀️🙏

question：Do you think students should have more time to use computers at school?

I think students chould have mare time.to use computers at schee!.
1. have Twe reasens. First, Computers hare a lot of. intormations.
Forexomple, If thex use computers, they can learn.a lat of things.
Second, compu ters are very. dangerous so, If is. important for thcm
.でo learm how.to, use compaters. that is 、why Ithink studemts should
have more time to case computers at sohool.

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Ryo.S

完璧だと思います！
文法表現や単語の間違いは見当たりません

おかき

本当ですか！ありがとうございます！
助かりました🙇‍♀️