Question

紋

学校の教師をAIに帰ることに賛成かの英作文なのですが、直した方がいい点はありますか？

Lagree with this opinion. I hae 4.
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reasons why I think so.
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First, We can qive odvice according to 8
the leaming level of the children.
We will be able to efficiently Study our 8
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weak areas .
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Second, it leads to a reduction in the e
burden on teachers. It _will impore
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School activities..
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Third, it leads to lower education 6
Costs. № labor Costs for Al.
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last, it enables real- time adnice. 6
For these reasons, I agree
with this 7
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opinion.

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ジョン

3行目はたぶん受動態でwe can be gave/advisedとした方が紋さんのいいたい意味になると思います。
8行目はimpoveはimproveのスペルミスですかね

紋

ありがとうございます。