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英語のレポートで味噌汁の作り方を書くのですが、添削としていただきたいです。また少ない気もするので、なにか加えていただけるとうれしいです、、よろしくお願いします。

How to miso soup
① お鍋に in the pan 水と water and 出汁パック dasi
soup pacu λh put b< Tuntil it changes
3 boil
First, water and dasi soup pack put in a pan until
it changes color.
2 tofu
mashroom, add, 3
three minutes
boil
Second, add some block of tofu and mashrooms
and boil three minutes.
37k water Istopred miso white
miso を加える add
Next,stop heating and add red miso and white
miso.
④ かき混ぜてmix完成complete
Finally, mix them and complete

英語

Answer 1

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taka

いくつかの改善点があると思います。
参考にしてください。

How to miso soup → How to make miso soup
① First, water and dasi soup pack put in a pan until it changes color.
→ First, put water and dashi soup pack in a pan(平鍋)/pot(深鍋), and boil it until it changes its color.
② Second, add some block of tofu and mashrooms and boil three minutes.
→ Then, add some blocks of tofu and mushrooms, and boil the pan/pot for three minutes.
③ Next, stop heating and add red miso and white miso.
→ Next, stop heating the pan/pot, and add red miso and white miso
④ Finally, mix them and complete.
→ Finally, mix them gently in the pan/pot, and it is complete!