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I don't think that traveling by trainis better than traveling by carI have two reasons for thisFirst, It, is fun. we can talk with my friends in big voice.Second, It is ease.We can movewhen we like. For these two reasonsI don't think that traveling by train isbetter than traveling by car.

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• QUESTIONについて、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ英文で書きなさい。
語数の目安は50語~ 60語です。
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QUESTION
Do you think traveling by train is better than traveling by car?

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しかし、英語表現に修正が必要な個所がいくつかあります。
参考にしてください。
I don't think that traveling by trainis better than traveling by car
→ No, I don't think that traveling by train is better than traveling by car.
⇒ No, I don't think so. ※語数制限(50～60語)を考えるとこれかな？
※Do you think …?の質問に、まず明確にYes/Noを表明する＋最後ピリオド(.)必要
I have two reasons for this → I have two reasons for this. ← ピリオド(.)必要
First, It, is fun.
→ First, it is more fun to travel by car. 車で移動する方が(電車)より楽しい。
※it is fun：itが何を指しているのか不明
we can talk with my friends in big voice.
→ We can talk with our friends in a loud voice.
Second, It is ease. → Second, it is easier. ※常に電車との比較を意識する
We can move when we like.
→ We can travel whenever we like to (travel：省略). いつでも好きな時に移動できる。
For these two reasons, I don't think that traveling by train is better than traveling by car. 〇
別解：For these two reasons, I think that traveling by car is better than traveling by train.

以上です。