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Qオンライン授業の是非について100語程度で論じなさい
<意見> オンライン授業は有効である
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通学の必要がなく時間が短縮でき、短縮した時間を
他のことにあてられるから。
<理由2> オンライン授業はいつでも見ることができ、また何度も見ることが
できるので効率的に学習ができ、生徒の成績向上につながるから。
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(11) In my opinion, Online education is
conventional eduction for two.
reasons.
(1) First, students don't have to go to school
by making use of online education..
They
save time
to Commute..
So, they can spend the time on other things.
For example, doing home work, reading book, meeting firends.
[798 11 2) Second, whenever students can take an online class.
Also, they can review things they learn by taking an online.
class...
better than
So, they can study more efficiently
( 1 ) Making use of online education will improve
student grade.
<> For the reasons above, I think that
We should make use of online education.
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