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元々恥ずかしがり屋だったが生徒会に立候補した。その結果人前で話したり緊張しなくなった。また生徒会長になったことで人をまとめることができるようになった。もし生徒会をやってなかったら恥ずかしがり屋のままだっただろう。グループワークに役に立てると考える

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Write about an important decision that you have made in your life, and explain
how that decision affected you.
An important decision I ran for the student Council. I was shy
Was
when I was a child. However I longed for the student council. When I
in junior high school, I ran for the student council and became a member
of the student council. In addition, I became the student president
As a result I am no longer afraid of public speaking, and I am no longer
nervous. Additionally I was president of
president of the student Council, I can organize
people. If I had not become a student Council, I'd have stayed shy.
I think that I would become useful in group work.

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