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りこ

ホームステイに行く際に事前にホストファミリーの方に手紙を書くんですけど、訂正箇所とかがあれば教えて欲しいです。あと、手紙を書く際書いておくといいフレーズとかがあったらアドバイスお願いします🙏🥲‎✨️

Dear my host family,
自分の名前
Hello! My name is
Thank you for taking on me as my host family.
I'm the first grade of high school. I'm good at swimming
and manufacturing. My favorite sports are volleyball and basket
ball, I usually spend weekends with my friends singing karaoke
or watching Anime. I like Anime very much since childhood.
This is my first time to go to U.k. I went to France when
I was in the third grade of elementary school.
This will be my second time going abroad,
So Im
I wish experience the different culture. This is also my
first experience to Join the home stary program,
nervous but very looking forward to meeting you.

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ととろ

よく書けていると思います
これ以上良くしたいなら、ここでネイティブでない日本人に聞くよりもAIに添削してもらうといいですよ

りこ

ご丁寧にありがとうございます😭
無事書けました✨️🍀