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ねこ

英作文の添削お願いします。
テーマは「自動運転車の長所と短所について」です。
100点満点で点数も付けていただきたいです。

that
There
are
advantages and
disadvantages
I think
one of the advantages is
people than
Cats
which
we
have
to
most
that
people think
to
using self-driving
cars.
it is more useful for many
drive by ourselves. In general,
the elders should.
drive in order to
avoid some accidents. However, they
advantage of self-driving.
can
Cars.
not
go to anywhere they houp by taking
In contrast, I think using
Self-driving cars may lead to some accidents, which is
one of the
dis advantages. If the systems of self-driving cars are
out of
order • Traffic accidents may occur. Moreover, self-driving cars are
more expensive
Conventional cars, so buying self- driving cars
Than
may be hard for many people.

Answer 1

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碧聖/あおい

日本語訳(自分が書こうとした文を日本語で)書いてください。他言語で書いているので、伝わり方が変わったりします。
日本語訳と照らし合わせると点数をつけることはできますが、内容面を見ないなら文法事項などで50-70点くらいといったところでしょうか。

ねこ

詳しく教えていただいてありがとうございました！