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I think that the elderly population will increase in the future. I have two reasons to support this opinion. First of all, medicine is evolving. If the elderly people become ill, medicine cures them. Second, currently, they exercise. This is good for their health. If they don’t exercise, they will live a long life or a healthy life. Therefore, they will exercise to enjoy a long life a healthy life. For these reasons, I think that the elderly population will increase in the future.

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Currently, many elderly people do various things to enjoy a long and healthy life. Do you
think that the elderly population will increase in the future?
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Exercise
Medicine
Hobby
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