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Je ON van to 則  All drivers must have good gemigh to recognize fraffic

]ights, road signs, pedestrians、 and other cars. Tn other Words, 1t 8 necessary for drivers to

_drive confirming the safety of others. Drivers must also have good reflexes because they need

JH so they should not di ive.  、The MM reason is that more and more 雪tall accidents by
people aged 80 or older are increasing, According to the StatiSIicS that the Metropolitan Police
Department put together、 the ntmbet of fatal accidents per 8 hundred thousand people wiho

have sa driver's license is outstandingly large in the age gTOUD of 80 years or older. In addition,
it shows that the cause of most accidents is that they step oh the g8 pedal jstead of the
brakes. Tf they continue to be allowed to driVe, the fatal accidents by them wi increaS1ng.

The third reason is that people aged 80 or older Can SaVe ImOHeY 中 they don1t drive, Or
example, gasoline and maintenance coSts an taXeS. They Can spend extra money do1ng neW
things, such as watching movie, drawing DiCtuTeS 生 earnest,and taking pictures」 hey also

can enjoy other vehicles, and it ill be meaningflto go on a relaxing ttiD Dy train, bus、 and

taxi_Eor these three reasons, 1 think that people over the age of 80 should not drive and be

controlled.ぐ

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gasoline and maintenance costs and taxesは
gasoline, maintenance costs and taxesではないでしょうか？