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英検2級のライティングですがこれでいいでしょうか？
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Q, Tokyy, Same pearple buy produets that are
good fr the emvirenment.
Do yu think brying sudh prodncts will becone
more common in the future.
A, I agee with, the opinion that baying sueh
products will bCcome more common in the tuture
for tre reasans.
First, Erer people that are poor can buy them.
That's because matferials for makiny then are
cheaper,
Secondl the envirannent are getting worse.and
that is connecte d with our health,so people
There tre, people Moticing that will staurt to buy
Such prodcacts in order to Meul with tor the
envionment heing worse.
For these reasons, I think buyingsauch praducts is gorkg
o become Common in the.tuture.
Megg soch podets
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Answer 1

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Liberty

Therefore〜の文で、deal with forとありますが、deal with〜で「〜に対処する、〜を扱う」なのでforは要らないと思います。