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本文に合う英文を書きなさい。
(1) 妹と私は子どものころ、 よく家の近くの神社でいっしょに遊んだものだ。
When my sister and Ⅰ were children, we used to play at the shrine near our
(2) ご注文いただいた本を明日までにお受け取りになっていない場合はどうか私ともにお知らせください。 house Togetho.
Could
you tell me know if you haven't received the book.
you
Lordered tomom
(3) 彼らは3年の結婚生活を経て子どもを授かった。
After they had been married for three years, they gave a child.

6 (1) (1) My sister and I used to play together
at the shrine near our house when we were
children.
(2) If you haven't received the book you
ordered by tomorrow, please let us know.
(3) They had been married for three years
when they had a child.