Question

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英作文の採点をお願いします

あなたは留学先の授業でエッセーを書くことになり、以下のテーマを選びました。 このテーマを読んでいない人にも伝わる
ようにエッセーを書きなさい。
【エッセーのテーマ】
学生はクラブ活動をすべきだという意見があります。 この意見について、 賛成か反対か、いずれかの立場を選んで、あ
なたの意見とその理由を書きなさい。
I think
so
milamu [AL
too
That's because
make friends and enjoy with them.
high school
I have only friends who are
But, I could make.
my hocky friends since
5
I
went
we
Can
I'm belong to
Before I enterit
+
same a junior high school. But
thanks to
other friends thanks
I entered
Also,
and Oguni with them.
want
Galaman yo
the hocky team in a
hocky games
to
Aso
In Oguni, there
I watched them
11. were
for the first time
then I thought that
I
to be
a
win other them.
good hocky player and
Since I thought it,
every
I have practiced
practiced hard with them
day. So I think that the students
mie
should do
club activities
now.
10
aldehismen (0)
oldienue [al
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