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モナミ🥨

英作文の文章写真で撮りました。添削希望です。英検受験日明日です！
前回挙げた質問に写真が上手く載せられなかったのでもう一度お願いします🤲
理由は掃除の仕方を知ることができる。
と、自分の部屋を自分で掃除するようになるです。

Q. Do
you
think students should clean their classrooms by themselve!
I think students should clean their classrooms by themselve.
I have two reasons.
First, It is
Date
can
way.
important for them to clean by themselve.
They
know the to cleaning the class rooms and rest room.
Second,
they will be to clean their room by themselve.
For these reasons, I think students should clean their classrooms.
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Answer 1

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海外大学3年生ゆー

画像を添付しました。

きのこ

外からごめんなさい。
文法おかしくないですか？

モナミ🥨

添削ありがとうございます。
参考にさせて頂きます。

Answer 2

きのこ

理由が似通っているし、掃除の仕方を知るって理由として弱いかなーと思います。

例えばですけど、掃除を自分たちでやることで、協調性が育まれるとか、習慣が身につくとか

Firstly,cleaning their classrooms on their own leads to cultivating the ability to cooperate.In addition to this,this skill will be useful when they start working in the future.

Secondly,school rules that students have to clean by themselves give them the habit of their tidying up their room.

For these reasons, I’m sure that students had better clean their classrooms on their own.