Question

生徒A

文法のミスがないか添削お願いします。💦

I
I
do
not think about that.
for it r
have two reasons
First reasong Packages has got damage.
are
For example, when it is rainy, Packages has wet.
If there
foods in the packges, you want to not
machines in the pakages, they
are not
eat there. If there are
had be broken. Second reason, There
security at the packages. If packages leave
off by the door, they will be stolen.

英検

Answer 1

も

packagesは複数なのでhas→haveあとなぜ完了形にしたのかが分からないです。現在形でいいのでは？
packages has got damage→packages got damage またはpackages is damaged
foods→some food
you want not eat→you don't want to eat もしくはyou want not to eat
they had be broken(壊れてしまった)→they will be broken(壊れるだろう)
there are not security→there are no security
packages leave off→packages are left off
packagesはleave offされる側です
they will be stolenよりもthey may be stolenくらいの方がいいのでは?文法的にはあっていますが

も

英語がすごく得意な訳では無いので間違っているかもしれませんが違和感を感じたところを書きました🙇🏻‍♀️💦