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たき

英検 準1級ライティングの添削お願いします
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agee or disagree in the future, more people need to eat only vegetables to live. です

One reason is that having only vegetables may leeds to unhealthy. People need eat yo make their bodies strong. Especially, young people had better to have lots of meats such as beefs or porks due to growing their bodies and protect from sick. Therefore, people should eat meats for own health.
Another reason is that the environment will be worse. If people eat plants and do not eat little meats, it might follow that people promote the deforestation beacause of growing many kind of plants. It is very terrible.

英検

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Ui

ChatGPT 使ったほうが、ここで質問するよりも良いアドバイスくれるよ

たき

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