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2 次のTOPICについて、賛成の意見とその理由を2つ書きましょう。 POINTSは,理由を書く
際の参考観点です (これ以外の理由を書いてもかまいません)。語数の目安は80語~100語です。
TOPIC Some people say that/the right to vote should be extended/to 16-year-
old citizens, Do you agree with this opinion?
POINTS
● Society
Politics
Rights
I think that the right to vote should be ortended to 16-year-
old citizens. I have two reasons to support this opinion.
First, It is useful for them in the future. If they can vote,
they research politiful, so they can know society.
To know society is important for them
maybe
Second, it is useful for government, Il 10-years-old
citizens vote, government can use their opinion.
It is important for society to alot of opinion
by citizens
agree
here fore, I that with
now
(6-year old citizen can
vote.
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