英検2級のライティングです。間違いやアドバイスがあればお願いします。採点もできればして欲しいです。

I think that it is importunt to set clar gouls when starting. new activities I have two The first reason is that reasons. First, it is effective to try new activities; for us. For example, if we want to give up New activities. We can continuex that. The scand reason is that. It is very help to decide planning. direction for effort. As a result. I'm able to know way to achive my goal. Therefore I agree with that it is important to set clear goals when starting new activities.

大至急！ 英検2級2024第3回のライティングです。 採点・添削をお願いします。 採点→各16点満点(内容4点、構成4点、語彙4点、文法4点)

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この問題の本来の並びと解くコツを教えてください。 1問だけでもいいのでお願いします🙇

2 語句を並べ替えてもっとも自然な英文を完成させ、2番目と5番目に入れるも のの記号を書きなさい。 ただし、文頭に来る語も小文字にしてある。 [各2点] 1. (1 ) ( 2 ) ( 3 ) ( 4 ) ( 5 ) ( 6 ) Japan did not work properly in France. A. the B. from C. that D. hair dryer E. brought F. I 2. I'm not sure ( 1 )(2)( 3 ) ( 4 ) ( 5 ) ( 6 ) the library before it closes. A. to D. make B. we E. can C. it F. if ) ( 2 ) ( 3 ) ( 4 ) ( 5 ) ( 6 ) on 3. This application ( 1 our smartphones into line drawings. A. pictures B. us C. taken D. enables E. turn F. to 4. I thought it difficult, ( 1 ) ( 2 ) ( 3 ), to persuade ( 4 ) ( 5 ) ( 6 ) wearing that costume. A. impossible D. out B. of E. Rick C. if F. not ) New Year's cards is becoming far ) before. 5. The ( 1 )(2)(3 )(5)(6 (4 A. of D. than B. common C. sending E. less F. practice

(4)合っていますか？ 15行目くらいからだと思います

次の英文を読んで,(1)~(5)の問いに答えなさい。 Takashi visited Mr. Paul in London during spring vacation. famous places in London with Mr. Paul. He stayed at Mr. Paul's house. Takashi went to some One day, Takashi wanted to visit other places near London by himself and he told Mr. Paul about it. Mr. Paul said, "Go to Brighton. The city is very beautiful, so it's Takashi read the timetable many times and he (visit) by many people." station at s He looked at the clock in the planned to take a train at 8:40 in the morning. He arrived at the He sat on a chair and looked around him. Then he felt that something was wrong/ station building. It was 9:30. 8:30. But Takashi was very surprised, so he looked at his watch, but it was still 8:30. He found an old woman and asked, She looked at her watch and answered, "It's 8:30." He was relieved. suddenly, the old woman said to him again, "Oh, sorry. It's summer time now. 7.It started yesterday, so it's 9:30 10 "Excuse me, but what time is it now ?" now.' But just then her train came, so she stopped the conversation and ⑤( get) on the train. He went to Brighton. He enjoyed the city very much. Takashi didn't understand. took the next train at 9:40 and Takashi took a train back to London in the evening. He told Mr. Paul about his conversation with the old woman at the station. Mr. Paul laughed. Takashi asked, "What's summer time?" Mr. Paul said, "We have long daytime in summer. 15 From the end of March to the end of October, we put the clock forward an hour and then back again in fall. We do it to use the daytime more usefully. There are some good points, but also some problems." Takashi thought it was interesting. Mr. Paul said, "I want you to learn more about summer time." "I will," Takashi answered. After he came back to Japan, he went to the library and read a book about summer time.

370って別に➀でも形としては合ってるくないです？

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（5)合っていますか？

J A few days later, I heard something from her room. When I entered her room, her phon was ringing on the table. I didn't answer the phone, but I saw an album on the table/M name was on it. When I opened it, there were many pictures of me. Then, I found a lot o letters in the album, too. I read one of them. I enjoyed reading the book with you. You rea it with me many times. Thank you!" I wrote it when I was a small boy. She had a lot o pictures and old letters from me. I was moved by that. H (4) 次の質問 Wha Wh

問4の⑤の計算はどうすれば合うのですか。 教えてください🙇‍♀️ 3枚目が答えです。

次の英文を読んで,下の設問に答えなさい。 Last year, 4.2 million babies died. That is the most recent number reported by UNICEF of deaths before the age of one, worldwide. We often see lonely and emotionally charged numbers like this in the news or in the materials of activist groups or organizations. They produce a reaction. Who can even imagine 4.2 million dead babies? It is so terrible, and even worse when we know that almost all died from easily preventable diseases. And how can anyone argue that 4.2 million is anything other than a huge number? You might think that nobody would even try to argue (that, but you would be wrong. That is exactly why I mentioned this number. Because it is not huge: it is beautifully small. If we even start to think about how tragic each of these deaths is for the parents who had waited for their newborn to smile, and walk, and play, and instead had to bury their baby, then this number could keep us crying for a long time. But who would be helped by these tears? Instead let's think clearly about human suffering. The number 4.2 million is for 2016. The year before, the number was 4.4 million. The year before that, it was 4.5 million. Back in 1950, it was 14.4 million. That's almost 10 million more dead babies per year, compared with today. Suddenly this terrible number starts to look smaller. In fact (2)the number has never been lower. Of course, I am the first person to wish the number was even lower and falling even faster. But to know how to act, and how to prioritize resources, nothing can be more important than doing the cool-headed math and realizing what works and what doesn't. And this is clear: more and more deaths are being prevented. comparing the numbers. (3). We would never realize that without

間違っている下線部がどれなのかわかる方教えていただきたいです。

(1) Although numerous attempts to solve the complex equation, the (2) mathematician struggled to find a viable solution. (3) (4)

読解問題 わかる方答えを教えていただきたいです。

As I see it, civil servants should never be afraid of challenging, advising, and pushing forward and, once a decision is made, they should be wholly clear about implementing it.

( ) に共通する c で始まる単語を教えてください🙇‍♀️

(i) to be equivalent or interchangeable, as when two items have identical properties or characteristics: The company's policies on employee benefits (c_) to industry standards. (ii) to exchange messages: He used to (c_) with his friends by sending handwritten letters.